Chap 583

- Ace's friend is named Sabo
- They steal money from crooks to save
up for a pirate ship
- Luffy finds out and they tie him up and plan
to kill him so he won't tell others
- A pirate Ace stole money from
shows up and finds Luffy while Ace and Sabo hide
- The pirate asks
where the money is and Luffy lies
- The lie is so bad that the pirate
plans on torturing him
- Ends with a cliffhanger on whether Ace will
or will not save Luffy.

Originally Posted by Aohige_AP View Post
ohana's script:

Chapter
583: Final Destination for the Uncertain

Dadan tells Luffy
she'll give him food and water, but if he wants meat he's gonna have to
get it himself.
She also makes Luffy do errands in the house

Ace
is off to somewhere
Luffy goes after luffy, abandoning his errands
Ace
comes back to the house first
Luffy comes back to the house a week
later, all beat up

But Luffy goes after Ace every day month after
month.
After three month or so, he arrives at the Gray Terminal,
where there's heaps of trash.

Sabo is sitting on top of the tree
nearby
Ace calls Sabo up
Ace and Sabo are doing crooked things to
save up hidden savings for piracy
Luffy arrives and tells them he's
gonna be a pirate too
Luffy now knows Sabo and Ace's secret
Ace
and Sabo ties Luffy to a tree and tries to kill him, but can't (they've
never killed anyone yet)

A large man who Ace stole the money from
appears, and is looking for Ace
Luffy is caught by the man, and asks
for help

The large man asks Luffy if he knows Ace, and he
answers yes
He then asks where the money is, but Luffy tells him he
doens't know (Luffy is terrible at lying)

The man tells Luffy
well then, I'll make you remember, and takes him away

Will Ace
& Sabo save Luffy or not?
End of chapter